Sawdust's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Adventure]

PRETTY GOOD STUFF

change up the instrument selection though, the composition itself is okay, but the instruments you picked are unfitting

[the loop of absoulute oddity]

Horrible

I can't even begin to explain how horrible this is. You labeled it wrongly, it should be labeled "DnB" instead of country. It has no rhythm whatsoever, just kicks with some claps thrown in.

[loopy loop loop 10]

Stupid

I don't even understand why you're wasting the space of NG with this horrid shit.
First off, it's just a sitar being strum in a simple manner, that's it. Second, it doesn't loop well. I hope you improve.

[loopy loop loop 12]

Horrid

First off, the intro was just white noise. Then the rest of the loop was random notes strung together. I suggest you invest more time and effort into your "music"

[Arpeggial Suicide]

Meh. A bit repetitive.

Your main problem in this song is basically your lead, It's like 8-bit but worse.
You can try improving this by changing up the instruments like the 8-bit like leads.
The percs are fine though since it's virtually impossible to screw up on percs.

[[BK] Plea]

Very gentle and soothing.

Perfect in a picnic scene.... So pleasant.

The song is great, like what would happen when Daft Punk fuses with Beethoven.
Truly wonderful.

[Not so Simple]

Extend this...

It's a wee bit too short and it could use lyrics maybe or drums, a bassline would be good too. Overall it's a good song since it loops nicely. Work on your compositions so next time the result will be EPIC.

Review Request Club.

aldlv responds:

ohh.. thanx... I think is going to be hard to add lirycs.. but I like the idea of the drum... & bassline

[Piggies]

Remix this please!

For this song to be better than it already is you need to edit it so it can loop nicely.

Where this song can be :

In a movie about disco farm animals. It has that feeling you get when you see animals in the zoo.

[Objection! ReduX]

Very catchy.

If you removed the slayer it would be a little better.
It's very suitable for like a game wherein you are a mermaid and you like swim and hit people with your flipper....

You're a very talented audio artist, but can use just a WEE bit of improvement.

Raging-HaMsTeR responds:

Maybe the client I was defending in court was a mermaid... lol

[SizzloRox - Nuke]

Very fresh....

When I like a song, I call it fresh.

Anyways, This song is very uptempo and it can be good in a chase scene maybe.
The only thing I can ask you to improve is well, NOTHING!
This song is good on it's own. Should be in a movie about a Wapanese metropolis.