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Stage 2 of making the album

Posted by Sawdust - June 19th, 2011


So now my band's got the songs, and all we need to do now is work on the instrumentation and milk the shit out of the existing songs. Here's the demo so far.

And here's our Facebook page. Go like us.

Mmmhm. Tell me what you think.

Stage 2 of making the album


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Pretty good. I like your use of distortion, esp. in Truman. And I actually like the vocals on Truman, which makes it my favorite track. Improve the intro to Tomorrow in Bloom, have the drummer keep better time in the "Buckley" sounding songs, and maybe get a vocal teacher. Even though they give it all a nice post-punk like feeling, it kinda gets in the way of the music when you can't maintain a steady pitch for more than a half-note (sorry if this comes of as offensive. Good effort regardless).

Still good to see you're improving. Can't wait to see the final draft. And remember, regardless of criticism, do not forget to create what you want. Otherwise you're making other peoples music.

Thanks a whole lot, man. I'm glad you like our guitar tone! We use metal distortion on our guitars and etc.

Also yes, there's definitely a lot to do in the way of improvement, because these demos are still extremely rough. It'll all sound far better once we record in a proper studio. Thanks again!

get a new band name bro block monkeys is a homo name

i personally like it