Sawdust's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Church Boy Fresh]

Catchy beat

Catchy beat, it loops well. I don't like how you depended on filter automations so much though, and that Speakonia or something whisper at the start, it's pretentious, remove it, but hey you're the one making the music if you don't care fine.

'Tis all

MYDBoi responds:

Thanks. Im use to using the filter automation. Im not THAT great lol. I have yet still alot to learn. Its the only way i can get a certain sound, and make it sound realistic. The speech whisper, i only use it to brand my beats. =/ Thanks for the review. Check out my page for more.

[yellow snow]

Very strange

It's not terrible, but it's not very good either. The vibe here is... unplaceable, and I really have no idea what I'm listening to. This could probably be a nice backdrop to a rap song though.

Also what program did you make this with?

acidmittens responds:

i made it in about an hour, so it´s sort of rushed :P i used fruityloops 8, with Ni massive and a drum loop. there´s some gltich applied with dblue gltich but it is mostly ruin the song :P

[Saturn Can You Hear Me?]

vocals bad for my tastes; everything else spot on

I like the writing of everything, like the lyrics and guitars and whatnot. And how the bass melded in with the rest of the instruments and basically how everything fit together perfectly; with the vocals of course sort of ruining the feel of the song; but you'll probably fix them soon anyway.

So yeah, my only problem was the vocals; everything else was great!

giftedbuttwisted responds:

Yeah, vocals suck XD

[Mama can you cook some candy?]

Decent

I don't know why, but I think this would sound MUCH better if you ( or whoever was singing ) would try to imitate Liam Gallagher ( that's Oasis, a britpop band, hence the weirdness, but it fits more really. )

And if that electric sounding guitar is bass, it should really be lower, and have more "oomph" I mean it's like everything's caught in the middle frequency, So a bass added in/bass adjusted to be lower would do wonders with the song.

Overall it's fine, but the vocals aren't really my cup of tea.

Urbanus responds:

Huzza! Thanks for the input.

[Lejin - U aint me]

6 because of the irritating rap

Upload another version without the rap, it's very annoying. Like, the reverb/echo whatever at the start was a bad effect. The way you were rapping was bad, like the tone and the way you chanted, it was infuriating. Especially the part near the end, sounded like someone was having a seizure, work on that. The lyrics were also bad, too generic, nothing poetic, nothing entertaining. Work on that too. And the kids cheering at the beginning, take it out, it's odd.

Now, the music was fine, if not it was great, so if the music was done by you I'd strongly suggest uploading a lyricless version.

All I have to say, and no this is not a diss.

Lejin responds:

The sole purpose of this 'is' to keep someone angry. If you want to get emotional then please by all means, please do ^_^

the truth hurts.
Go ahead and get mad =D

- Mr Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's #1 Artist)

[Not so Simple]

Extend this...

It's a wee bit too short and it could use lyrics maybe or drums, a bassline would be good too. Overall it's a good song since it loops nicely. Work on your compositions so next time the result will be EPIC.

Review Request Club.

aldlv responds:

ohh.. thanx... I think is going to be hard to add lirycs.. but I like the idea of the drum... & bassline

[Objection! ReduX]

Very catchy.

If you removed the slayer it would be a little better.
It's very suitable for like a game wherein you are a mermaid and you like swim and hit people with your flipper....

You're a very talented audio artist, but can use just a WEE bit of improvement.

Raging-HaMsTeR responds:

Maybe the client I was defending in court was a mermaid... lol

[Trancey]

Wow. Amazing.

I can't believe you bettered me on your first submission. But, then again maybe you have the full version that allows you to save. Some of my stuff isn't that good because I can only spend less than a day on it.

On the song.
It's very mellow and can use some improvements.
Like that squeaky mouse thing in all of the song.
Remove it and I may reward you a niner.

g0nadz responds:

Thanks man i really apreciate that im sorta new to newgrounds and stuff also quite new to making music :) i have literally just submitted a seconds song it took me about a week to create what is there but i know the song isnt finished yet. Icant wait to see what you think of it. Although it is quite repetitive.

Anyway man if you have msn my addie is [e-mail] add me feel free and that goes to anyone who is reading this message :)

Peace

[Parasound]

Great Job.

No room for improvement here. But the fact that I gave you a nine is because it's sort of a loop with a different part in the middle and you just scramble the order of the patterns.

So, yeah. 4/5, 9/10.

Sytze responds:

Thanks